The First One Thousand Words

The most important part
of any romance novel
is the first one thousand words.
Readers decide in those first one thousand words
whether or not they will buy the novel.

I have rewritten the first one thousand words
of my latest manuscript
at least ten times this week.
I’m still not happy with it.

What am I searching for?

A few things…
emotion – something that makes readers feel
a hook – something that distinguishes the story
and
a connection – characters and a plot that readers care about.

I won’t be happy until I have all three
because the story won’t sell
unless it has all three
and a product that doesn’t sell
is a waste of everyone’s energy.

Know why your customers buy
and then give them that something
as soon as possible.
Everything else is gravy.

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